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What is the question asking?

The question asks you to explain both the government's and parents' roles in childhood obesity and then share your own opinion.
The question asks you to argue only for the government's role in childhood obesity.
The question requires you to discuss only parental responsibility without mentioning the government's role.
The question asks you to provide solutions to childhood obesity without discussing the roles of the government or parents.

Start by rephrasing the question.

Briefly introduce the two viewpoints and your opinion.

Section 1: Government Responsibility

Discuss the role of the government in influencing childhood obesity.

Provide examples of government actions.

Explain how these actions can impact childhood obesity.

Section 2: Parental Responsibility

Discuss the importance of parents' role in their children's diet and lifestyle.

Provide examples of how parental actions can prevent or reduce child obesity.

Explain the immediate impact of parental influence.

Section 1: Opinion and Analysis

Choose a linking word.

Discuss why government responsibility may be more effective.

Choose a linking word.

Discuss why parental responsibility may be more effective.

Choose a linking word.

Acknowledge the importance of a combined effort.

State your opinion clearly and support it with reasons.

Section 2: Closing Paragraph

Summarize the key points regarding government and parental responsibility.

Provide a final thought or call to action.

Everyone should work together to help children lead healthier lives by promoting good eating habits and regular physical activity.
Parents and governments must join forces to create a supportive environment that encourages children to stay active and eat healthily.
Let's take immediate steps to improve our children's health by making better food choices and encouraging more exercise.
By acting now, both at home and through public policy, we can reduce childhood obesity and ensure a healthier future for the next generation.

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